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P.B. Wait’s article, The Charlottetown Conference, is
an excellent attempt at convincing the reader that “the substitution of
Confederation for Maritime union was a brilliant stroke engineered by Canadians
from the
P.B.
Waite substantiates his sub-argument that “Maritime politicians were reluctant
to accept Maritime union”[2] by giving some plausible explanations for this reluctance. Waite thoroughly explains, for example, that
the Maritime politicians could not agree on where the new capital of ‘
Waite
also in this argument does bring forth counterbalancing evidence that
substantiates the claim to ensure that the dream of a ‘Maritime union’ continue
to exist. Waite notes that having three
provinces with “the full apparatus of a two-chamber legislature, a responsible
government, and yet with a combined population of not more than 700,000. It was
ridiculous and it was expensive”.[4] Also, he notes the
bureaucratic waste that could be solved with the union of the Maritimes by
pointing out that each Maritime colony was similar to separate countries. Waite substantiates this fact by pointing out
that each colony “had its own stamps, coinage, [and] customs duties”.[5] This duplication, if it were removed, would
obviously create some cost savings for the
Waite
claims that the Intercolonial Railway was the initial
spark that started the movement towards negotiating some form of union between
the
Also, in this section Waite claims “Her
Majesty’s Government made stipulations that made the Canadian delegates acutely
uncomfortable”.[7] However, Waite does not say
what stipulations the British Government made that made the Canadian delegates
uncomfortable, thereby, leaving the reader questioning if this claim is true at
all. Perhaps a further explanation in a
few parts of this area of his article would be beneficial to the reader via
endnotes. Endnotes would be beneficial
to Waite’s audience because the notes would provide an area where an
explanation to substantiate his claim could be given without bogging down the
non-historical reader with details.
Overall, this section needs some minor editing in order to ensure that
proper evidence is utilized to substantiate the author’s claims.
Waite’s
best argument is when he outlines the actual Charlottetown Conference
itself. His argument that the Canadian
delegation had, for weeks, “been preparing their scheme of union”[8] is further substantiated by the extensive evidence he
provides. The evidence that Waite
presents is that each Canadian delegate had been given a specific area to
present to their Maritime counterparts at the conference. Waite presents this evidence while providing
a commentary on how this evidence was conveyed and the reactions of the
Maritime delegates to each of the speakers.
This allowed Waite, in the end, to claim that the Quebec Conference was
necessary in order to finalize the agreement because there were some
compromises that still needed to be made to satisfy some of the doubts of the
Maritime delegates. Overall, this
sub-argument convinces the reader that this is where the Canadian delegation
brilliantly convinced the Maritime politicians to embrace the idea of
Confederation.
P.B.
Waite’s sub-arguments are not exactly supported by totally solid primary or
secondary sources. However, since Waite
is writing for a non-historical inclined audience, the article needed to be
simplified by trying not to overwhelm the reader with details. Therefore, Waite is forced to strip away some
of the details in order to simplify his explanations. Sighting this need, this article would not be
suitable for an audience of historians without substantial re-editing in order
to include suitable evidence and footnoted sources. Although the arguments are simplified for his
audience, Waite’s arguments do follow a believable process from the initial
reluctance toward the idea of Maritime Union to the overall conclusion on how
the idea of Confederation was embraced.
The Canadian Historical Society
made an excellent choice in choosing P.B. Waite as the author of this
particular event in Canadian history. This is because Waite, an Historian at
About P.B. Waite
P.B.
Waite, born in
Waite, P.B. The
[1]P.B. Waite. The
[6]Waite 5.